Question

Every one of us has shortcomings. However, what’s the most important is that we should recognize them and overcome them.

注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③文中不得透漏個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

④詞數(shù)不少于120。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

As a saying goes．“Gold can’t be pure and man can’t be perfect．”As for me，I had a shortcoming--carelessness．

At one time，I handed in my test paper，but I forgot to write my name on it，for which I was criticized severely by my English teacher．Things like this happened to me many times．This made me realize that I must overcome this shortcoming．It was not easy for me to get rid of this bad habit．With others’ help，I overcame this shortcoming in the end．Now，whatever I do，I always do it carefully．

Therefore，don’t be afraid of your shortcomings．Admit them and overcome them，which is the most important．

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)英文提示寫一篇短文。提示語的意思是“我們每個(gè)人都有缺點(diǎn)，然而，最重要的是我們應(yīng)該承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤并去客服它們。文章無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；內(nèi)容要結(jié)合事例，文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。詞數(shù)不少于120字，如引用提示語則不計(jì)入總數(shù)。

亮點(diǎn)說明：

范文一開頭就引用格言“Gold can’t be pure and man can’t be perfect．”，然后自然地過渡到自己要講的話題，很好的開頭。另外，文中用了許多句型如but I forgot to write my name on it，for which I was criticized severely by my English teacher．及Admit them and overcome them，which is the most important．非限制性定語從句，whatever I do，I always do it carefully．賓語從句，以及句型It is adj. for sb. to do ,這些都顯示了較高的運(yùn)用英語語法知識(shí)的能力。

其次，范文也運(yùn)用了許多固定短語：as for, at one time ,with sb’s help, be afraid of ;而且也注意使用but ,now ,therefore等銜接前后上下文，做到了語意連貫、銜接緊湊。這些都使文章達(dá)到了更高的水平。

考點(diǎn)：事例類作文