Question

It is good to see that today more people have realized the importance exercising and are playing sports regular. But the problem is that there are not enough sports facilities to meet the public growing demand. I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends. Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. It seems that all courts in the city were always full. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge is expensive. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will encourage more people to participate in sports.

Answer 1

【小題1】importance后加of
【小題2】regularly→regular
【小題3】public→public’s
【小題4】Therefore→However
【小題5】were→are
【小題6】permitted→permitting
【小題7】in去掉
【小題8】much→many
【小題9】expensive→high
【小題10】accesses→access

解析試題分析：
【小題1】 the importance∧exercising 鍛煉的重要性，所以應(yīng)加 of
【小題2】are playing sports regular。 副詞修飾動(dòng)詞。regular改為 regularly
【小題3】meet the public growing demand 應(yīng)該用名詞所有格修飾demand，公眾增長(zhǎng)的需要。public改為public’s
【小題4】I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends. Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field 根據(jù)上下文此處應(yīng)為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系Therefore 改為However
【小題5】It seems that all courts in the city were always full 文章敘述現(xiàn)在事情所以應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 were 改為 are。
【小題6】Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors 此處沒有連詞，所以應(yīng)是獨(dú)立主格做狀語(yǔ)，permitted改為permitting。
【小題7】we can play in﹨outdoors.  outdoors 是副詞，前面不用介詞，所以去掉介詞 in。
【小題8】we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, 此處指的是場(chǎng)地courts，所以應(yīng)用修飾復(fù)數(shù)名詞的many 代替much。
【小題9】the charge is expensive。價(jià)格費(fèi)用等詞，不用expensive修飾，而用high或者low.
【小題10】so easier accesses will encourage more people to participate in sports.  access “通道，接近的權(quán)利，機(jī)會(huì)”不用復(fù)數(shù)形式，比如 have access to .
考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)，考查發(fā)現(xiàn)和改正錯(cuò)誤的能力。