Question

請(qǐng)寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文，分析越來越多的中學(xué)生玩微博的原因和利弊。

注意  1）開頭和結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)    2）書寫清楚,卷面整潔

Micro blogs have become part of our lives and bring lots of benefits. …

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In my opinion，we should be careful and cautious while using micro blogs.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Micro blogs have become part of our lives and bring lots of benefits. It’s convenient for students to express feelings. Using micro blogs, they can not only share their ideas and experiences but also ask for help or seek comfort when in trouble. In other words, micro blogs provide a good place to reduce pressure. Besides, it’s an effective way to improve writing skills. You have to learn to write in a style that appeals to more readers to keep reading.

On the other hand, micro blogs may also affect students’ studies and normal lives. Some teenagers lack self-control and can easily become addicted to blogging. They spend too much time on blogs just for fun or to follow the fashion. They may even be misled or cheated by harmful contents if they cannot tell the difference between fantasy and real life.

In my opinion, we should be careful and cautious while using micro blogs.

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文討論的話題是微博的利弊。考生可以從微博給人一個(gè)空間表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，可以讓人從中得到安慰，減壓等方面著手。也可以講述很多人玩微博上癮，把太多的時(shí)間花在了微博上，導(dǎo)致學(xué)習(xí)或者工作出現(xiàn)問題。在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開放性作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。