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8．眾所周知，地震是一種可怕的自然災(zāi)害，近期日本和厄瓜多爾相繼發(fā)生7級以上大地震，造成了巨大的人員傷亡和財(cái)產(chǎn)損失．那么當(dāng)?shù)卣饋砼R我們需要怎樣去做呢？

在教室時(shí)	藏在課桌下面等待老師指示
在家時(shí)	藏在起居室或廚房的桌子下．不要去窗戶旁邊也不要去陽臺(tái)（balcony）
在街上時(shí)	不要站在建筑物，柵欄（fence）或墻邊，也不要站在樹下，要趕快到安全的露天的空地去

請根據(jù)以上信息寫一篇文章，題目已給出．
注意：詞數(shù)100左右．
What to Do During an Earthquake
As we all know，an earthquake is a kind of terrible disaster．So what should we do when an earthquake comes？
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱+圖表作文，地震來時(shí)我們應(yīng)該怎么做來保護(hù)自己．表格中的三點(diǎn)提示非常詳細(xì)，我們需要用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，要發(fā)揮想象把文章連起來．根據(jù)提示，可知要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．寫作中要注意復(fù)合句和連詞的使用．
寫作亮點(diǎn)  這篇短文要點(diǎn)全面，時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確，語言豐富．在寫作中運(yùn)用了大量的短語，連詞和復(fù)合句，如定語從句 As soon as an earthquake starts，students who are in the classroom should get under the desks immediately and wait until the teacher tells them it is safe to come out．However，for those who are at home，get immediately under the table in the living room or kitchen．非謂語動(dòng)詞What's more，standing under trees could also be dangerous．

解答 What to Do During an Earthquake
    As we all know，an earthquake is a kind of terrible disaster．So what should we do when an earthquake comes？
    As soon as an earthquake starts，students who are in the classroom should get under the desks immediately and wait until the teacher tells them it is safe to come out．（高分句型）However，for those who are at home，get immediately under the table in the living room or kitchen．Don't go anywhere near the window and don't go out onto the balcony．If you are in the street when an earthquake happens，do not stand near buildings，fences or walls．（高分句型）Move away as quickly as possible and try to find a large open place to wait in．What's more，standing under trees could also be dangerous．（高分句型）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．