Question

14．假如你是張華，最近你們班同學(xué)針對發(fā)生在青少年身上的交通事故的原因作了一次調(diào)查．請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，寫一封信給21st Century的編輯，說明你們調(diào)查的結(jié)果，并提出你的建議．

原因	司機(jī)	精力不集中，打手機(jī)，超速 酒后駕車
	青少年	不遵守交通規(guī)則 自行車車況差 邊走邊看書、聽音樂
建議	（自由發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)）

注意：信的格式和首句已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)
Dear Editor，
    I'm writing to tell you about the survey our classmates did about the causes of traffic accidents involving teenagers．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
                                               Yours faithfully
                                                 Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Because the teenagers don't follow all traffic signs and rules．
高分句型二：
 I think we should correct our bad habits so that there will less accidents．
句型一 Because the teenagers don't follow all traffic signs and rules．該句是一個由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，在句中起到說明原因的作用
句型二   so that there will less accidents 該句是一個由so that 引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句

解答 Dear Editor，
    I'm writing to tell you about the survey our classmates did about the causes of traffic accidents involving teenagers．（寫信目的）
  Firstly：Because drivers can't concentrate on their driving．While they are driving，they are making phone calls．They don't drive according to the speed limit and they drive over the speed limit．Some drivers drive after drinking．Secondly：Because the teenagers don't follow all traffic signs and rules．（高分句型一）Some of their bikes are in bad condition．Such as，they don't have brakes and bells．Some teenagers are listening to music when they are walking in the street．Some of them don't walk on the sidewalk．Before they cross the road，they don't look carefully．（闡述原因）
  I think we should correct our bad habits so that there will be fewer accidents．（高分句型二）

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