13．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
One activity that my family and I enjoy do every summer is taking our boat out．It's so many fun!We always invite one of our neighbour，Paul，to go with us．Paul is also my best friend，whom is the same age as me．He is good for swimming and fishing．I still remember last year he catches a very big fish．Every time we go boating，my father drives the boat．Sometimes he drives them really fast when we are sitting in front of the boat．We are very excited and happily．My mother always brings a lot of fruits and snacks．When we are hungry or thirsty，and we can eat them．

分析 我和我家人都喜歡劃船．真有趣！我們還經(jīng)常邀請(qǐng)鄰居一起劃船，Paul就是我最好的朋友，他喜歡游泳和釣魚．每次我們?nèi)澊己荛_(kāi)心．

解答 One activity that my family and I enjoy do every summer is taking our boat out．It's so many fun!We always invite one of our neighbour，Paul，to go with us．Paul is also my best friend，whom is the same age as me．He is good for swimming and fishing．I still remember last year he catches a very big fish．Every time we go boating，my father drives the boat．Sometimes he drives them really fast when we are sitting in∧front of the boat．We are very excited and happily．My mother always brings a lot of fruits and snacks．When we are hungry or thirsty，and we can eat them．
詳解：
1．do改為doing；動(dòng)詞搭配錯(cuò)誤．enjoy doing sth喜歡做某事． 
2．many改為much；形容詞錯(cuò)誤．句中修飾的是抽象名詞fun，要用much來(lái)修飾．  
3．neighbour改為neighbours；名詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是復(fù)數(shù)．  
4．whom改為who；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句中who引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句修飾名詞friend，且在從句中作主語(yǔ)，要用主格形式．  
5．for改為at；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．be good at doing sth擅長(zhǎng)做某事．  
6．catches改為caught；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．文章講述的是過(guò)去的動(dòng)作，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)． 
7．them改為it；代詞錯(cuò)誤．句意指代的是前面的boat，要用it來(lái)指代．
8．加the；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．in front of是外部的前面；in the front of是內(nèi)部的前面． 
9．happily改為happy；形容詞錯(cuò)誤．句中happy作系動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)，要用形容詞形式． 
10．去掉and；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句中when連接時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，后面是主句，不能用連詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．

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