Question

2．你校正在開展"共建和諧校園"活動(dòng)，你們班就"學(xué)生該做什么，不該做什么"進(jìn)行了討論，請(qǐng)根據(jù)討論內(nèi)容寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．

Dos	Don'ts
待人誠(chéng)實(shí)，守信 待人友好，樂于助人，尊敬他人 文明守紀(jì)，愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境	嚴(yán)禁撒謊、考試作弊 不要自私自利、言行傷人 根除遲到、亂吐、亂扔現(xiàn)象

注意：（1）詞數(shù)120-150；
（2）不能逐字翻譯；可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，以使行文連貫；
（3）文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞．
參考詞語(yǔ)：吐痰--spit（v．）；和諧校園--a harmonious campus．
The Harmonious Campus Project has become part of the education in our school．As for students，how should we behave ourselves？
In our daily life，it is essential for us to form some good habits．（高分句型一）First of all，we should be honest and faithful to others．Never tell lies or cheat in examinations．Secondly，respect each other．Don't be selfish or hurt others'feelings when talking．Thirdly，you have to avoid some bad habits，such as being late for school，throwing rubbish here and there or spitting in public．In general，it's our duty to protect our own environment．（闡述理由）
In my opinion，we all hope that we will be civilized students，do all that we should do，and do as much as we can to build our school into a harmonious campus．（高分句型二）（個(gè)人意見）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 In our daily life，it is essential for us to form some good habits．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，we all hope that we will be civilized students，do all that we should do，and do as much as we can to build our school into a harmonious campus．
句型一 it is essential for us to form some good habits 該句中使用了一個(gè)固定句型：it is+adj+for sb+to do sth 對(duì)于某人來說做．．是…
句型二 ①that we will be civilized students 該句是一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．that在從句中不做句子成分，只作引導(dǎo)詞 ②all that we should do 該句中有一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，that在句子作賓語(yǔ)．注意當(dāng)先行詞為all時(shí)，關(guān)系代詞只能用that
此外，該書面表達(dá)中還包含有以下重要短語(yǔ)和高級(jí)詞匯：
be faithful to  對(duì)．．忠實(shí)   in one's opinion  在某人看來
該書面表達(dá)中的重要句型部分的從句的使用和高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和詞匯的使用，使得文章更層次分明，表述更加確切完整．

解答 The Harmonious Campus Project has become part of the education in our school．As for students，how should we behave ourselves？（提出觀點(diǎn)）
   In our daily life，it is essential for us to form some good habits．（高分句型一）First of all，we should be honest and faithful to others．Never tell lies or cheat in examinations．Secondly，respect each other．Don't be selfish or hurt others'feelings when talking．Thirdly，you have to avoid some bad habits，such as being late for school，throwing rubbish here and there or spitting in public．In general，it's our duty to protect our own environment．（闡述理由）
   In my opinion，we all hope that we will be civilized students，do all that we should do，and do as much as we can to build our school into a harmonious campus．（高分句型二）（個(gè)人意見）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書面表達(dá)為圖表類，通常都有一定的數(shù)據(jù)或者表格內(nèi)容作為寫作參考和依據(jù)．考生應(yīng)細(xì)致觀察圖表內(nèi)容，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)單明了的語(yǔ)言將圖表內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚．另外，平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)短語(yǔ)和詞匯，以使得行文有更多的亮點(diǎn)．