Question

假設(shè)今天是十月一日（星期一），天氣晴朗，你和全班同學(xué)到南郊公園（NanJiao Park）游玩，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以日記的形式講述今天你的出游情況。
1. 上午乘車1小時(shí)到達(dá)目的地，爬山、唱歌、做游戲；
2. 中午吃完午餐后組織一個(gè)小活動，向游客宣傳環(huán)保的重要性；
3. 下午4時(shí)返回。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；  
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Monday October. 1^st.                                        Sunny
It's a nice day. My classmates and I went to NanJiao Park for fun. I think I'm supposed to say that I have never had so happy a day!
We arrived at the beautiful place in the morning. It took us around 1 hour by bus. Then we can't wait to go to the mountains. We also sang songs and played games together during the hiking. After lunch in the noon, we organized an activity in order to announce the importance of protecting the environment to tourists. We went back at 4.
It's really great!

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