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寫作(30%)
Don’t complain about your life. We should be thankful for what you have.談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⑴e例說明.
要求：字?jǐn)?shù)120左右

Answer 1

Don’t complain about your life. We should be thankful for what your have. I can’t agree more with this view. It’s true that our success depend on the attitude we treat the life. In other words, being thankful rather than complaining is so essential in our life that it helped and still helps a lot achieving success.
I know of a girl named Helen Keller whose story has always inspired me. She was a disabled girl who suffered blind and deaf when she was only 19 months old. However, she never complained her bad fate. Encouraged by her optimism, she made full use of her energy and lifetime to improve her ability on writing. What gave her a strong resolution was that she valued what she owned and regarded the dilemma as a motivation to made her way.
In my view, everyone will be in possession of happiness if we can always appreciate what we have and occupy ourselves in valuing somewhat Trouble. The less we complain, the more wonder we will gain.

試題分析：考察半開放性作文寫作。本文的話題是告訴我們在生活中不要抱怨，而是要對一切都心存感激之情�？梢粤信e生活中的具體的例子來說明，也可以以一些名人的例子來證明，如海倫.凱樂的例子等，他們經(jīng)歷了生活中很多的艱難，但是他們沒有抱怨，而是接受這一切，做出了自己的成績和貢獻(xiàn)。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評：半開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。