Question

假如你是高中二年級(jí)的學(xué)生張明，在學(xué)校組織了一項(xiàng)“有煩惱向誰(shuí)說(shuō)”的調(diào)查活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信，反映相關(guān)情況。內(nèi)容包括：調(diào)查結(jié)果（如圖所示）、持相應(yīng)想法的理由及你對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的看法。

注意：1．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．詞數(shù)120詞左右。

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior Two student．Recently we have carried out a survey — “To whom do you turn when in trouble?” The findings are as follows．

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Yours sincerely,

Zhang Ming

 

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior Two student. Recently we have carried out a survey—“To whom do you turn when in trouble?” The main findings are as follows.

71% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble and are in need of help. The reason is that they are of the same age and have a better understanding of each other. Another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to. They think that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences．Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of others’ business. Others find it hard to communicate with others.

It seems clear that some students lack communication with others. As far as I am concerned, teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives．

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的煩惱。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，文后注意提出自己的建議。本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱多為第一三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意運(yùn)用所給短語(yǔ)，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，適當(dāng)使用連詞。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】：本文中的短語(yǔ)還是較多的，carry out、 as follows、 in need of 、have a better understanding of和As far as I am concerned.都用了我們學(xué)過(guò)的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)；另外這篇文章里的好句型也是亮點(diǎn)，例如：71% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble and are in need of help. / The reason is that they are of the same age and have a better understanding of each other. / Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all./ It seems clear that some students lack communication with others.熟練正確的使用這些句型能體現(xiàn)考生的水平，也會(huì)給自己的文章加分。

考點(diǎn)：考查材料作文