Question

10．時(shí)下，越來(lái)越多的家庭擁有了轎車(chē)，同時(shí)車(chē)禍也在不斷上升．請(qǐng)圍繞"How to Drive safely？"寫(xiě)一篇80～100詞的文章，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下（括號(hào)中的詞匯可供參考）：
為了保護(hù)你和他人，開(kāi)車(chē)時(shí)應(yīng)記住以下幾點(diǎn)：（in order to，protect ）
1．不酒后駕車(chē)；（drink wine）
2．不疲勞駕駛；（tiredly）
3．開(kāi)車(chē)途中不使用電話：
4．遇到行人減慢你的車(chē)速．（slow down）
How to Drive Safely？
Nowadays，more and more families have cars．At the same time，there are a lot of car accidents every day．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
So in order to protect you and others，you should obey the following when you're driving．為了保護(hù)你和別人的安全，開(kāi)車(chē)的時(shí)候你應(yīng)該遵守以下規(guī)則．
高分句型二：
Finally，you should slow down when you see someone walking in front of your car on the road．
最后，當(dāng)你看到有人開(kāi)車(chē)走在你前面的路上時(shí)，你應(yīng)該放慢速度．
句型一 in order to protect you and others..該部分使用了固定短語(yǔ)in order to 位于句首，作目的狀語(yǔ)
句型二 when you see someone walking in front of your car on the road 該句是一個(gè)由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句
除此以外，該文章還有以下短語(yǔ)和重要詞匯：in front of 在．．前面

解答 Nowadays，more and more families have cars．At the same time，there are a lot of car accidents every day．So in order to protect you and others，you should obey the following when you're driving．（高分句型一）（點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)作目的）First，you mustn't drive your car after drinking wine．If you really need to drink some，you can take a taxi or a bus to the restaurant or home．Then you'd better not drive tiredly．When you feel tired，you can stop your car to have a rest．Next，don't use your phone when you're driving．Finally，you should slow down when you see someone walking in front of your car on the road．（高分句型二）
   If all the drivers can remember these，there will be fewer car accidents．（總結(jié)開(kāi)車(chē)重要性）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書(shū)面表達(dá)為提綱類(lèi)，該類(lèi)作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫(xiě)作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語(yǔ)言將作文展示出來(lái)．