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13．隨著電腦的普及，老師、家長和學生對書寫的重視程度降低了．據(jù)一項調(diào)查顯示，有85.8%的中學生說自己的書寫不好看，而他們又不想改善書寫，其理由有很大差別．請根據(jù)下表寫一篇100詞的短文，說明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表白己的看法．

可以用電腦寫字	51.5%
沒有時間練	32.3%
沒有什么用	10.9%
其他	5.3%

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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關于人們對書寫重視程度降低的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明主題；二敘述調(diào)查結果；三提出自己的看法．
高分句型：
Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，teachers，students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting．句子里the growing popularity 表示"增長的受歡迎的程度"；pay  attention to表示"注意"．
現(xiàn)在，隨著電腦逐漸受到歡迎，老師，家長和學生越來越不注意書寫了．
2.51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting句子里that引導賓語從句； there is no need to 表示"沒有必要做某事"．
百分之五十一點五的學生認為他們會用電腦，所以沒有必要浪費時間來練習書法．

解答 Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，teachers，students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting．【高分句型一】（點明主題）
According go a recent survey about 85.5 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor．Yet for various reasons，many students don't want to improve their hand writing.51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting．【高分句型二】And 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice.10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless．（敘述調(diào)查結果）
As the saying goes，writing style shows the man．Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial，especially for middle school students．Therefore，in my opinion，more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．（提出自己的看法）

點評 考查圖表類作文．
圖表作文的結構通常是三段式：
第一段簡要概述圖表所揭示的信息，重點強調(diào)圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)變化趨勢；
第二段強調(diào)圖表中最顯著的特點，分析原因，發(fā)表看法等；
第三段提出解決問題的辦法或建議．