Question

一位美國(guó)著名教授 (professor) Mr King 將到你們學(xué)校作關(guān)于美國(guó)語(yǔ)言的報(bào)告。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一份通知，向同學(xué)們宣布此事。
要點(diǎn)：1. 報(bào)告內(nèi)容包括：美國(guó)英語(yǔ)和英國(guó)英語(yǔ)的不同；美國(guó)語(yǔ)言的發(fā)展；美國(guó)方言。
2. 地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂。
3. 時(shí)間：10月7日上午9點(diǎn)。
4. 注意事項(xiàng)：不要遲到；帶上筆和筆記本；報(bào)告結(jié)束時(shí)可以提問(wèn)題；報(bào)告結(jié)束后將進(jìn)行討論。
[寫(xiě)作要求]
只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
Attention, please!
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That’s all. Thank you for your attention. 

Answer 1

Attention please.
I’ve something important to announce. Mr King a famous American professor will come to give us a talk about American English. He will explain some of the differences between American English and British English. He will also speak about the development of American English and American dialects.
The report will be held in our school hall at 9:00 am on October 7th. At the end of the talk you have a chance to come up with questions. And after the talk we’ll have a discussion.
Don’t forget to bring your pens and notebooks. Please don’t be late.
That’s all. Thank you for your attention.

解析試題分析：書(shū)面通知是書(shū)面的正式公告或布告，常常是張貼在顯眼的位置，多用notice作標(biāo)志。并常寫(xiě)在正文上方的正中位置。出通知的單位及時(shí)間一般寫(xiě)在標(biāo)志的上方或在正文后面的右下角；發(fā)出通知的時(shí)間要寫(xiě)在正文的左下角，也可按書(shū)信格式寫(xiě)正文的右上角。這兩項(xiàng)有時(shí)可以省略。通知的正文要寫(xiě)明所做事情的具體時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、概括性內(nèi)容(多為書(shū)面通知的首句)、出席對(duì)象及有關(guān)注意事項(xiàng)。布置工作的通知要把工作內(nèi)容和要求寫(xiě)清楚。正文一般可采用文章式，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)交代清楚，語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，不能拖沓。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔明了，要點(diǎn)齊備，詞組有：have a chance to do有機(jī)會(huì)做…，come up with 提出，想出，forget to do忘記 做…，句型好的有：I’ve something important to announce. 這句話用不定式做定語(yǔ)，The report will be held in our school hall at 9:00 am on October 7th. 這句話用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。
考點(diǎn)：考查書(shū)面通知寫(xiě)作