分析 這是一篇提綱類作文,根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱進(jìn)行敘述,時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主.內(nèi)容主要分為四部分:一回顧老師對(duì)自己的幫助;二感謝老師的幫助;三自己今后的打算;四呼吁每個(gè)人都要有感恩的情懷.
高分句型:
1.So occupied was she in helping me that she sometimes tended to skip her meals(so 位于句首時(shí),該句要用倒裝;be occupied in 表示"忙于做某事";tend to 表示"往往會(huì)").
她如此忙于幫助我,以至于往往會(huì)忘記吃飯.
2I owe my progress to my English teacher(owe…to表示"歸功于,歸因于"),without whose (引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句,代指先行詞 my English teacher)unselfish guidance I wouldn't have made such rapid progress
我把自己的進(jìn)步歸功于我的老師,沒有她的無(wú)私的指導(dǎo),我不會(huì)有這么快的進(jìn)步.
解答 Possible version:
Good afternoon,everyone!
It's a great honor for me to speak here.Today,I'd like to express my gratitude to my English teacher.To my regret,my English suffered greatly in the first year and I fell far behind others.She showed the utmost patience when I asked her questions.So occupied was she in helping me that she sometimes tended to skip her meals(高分句型一).Deeply inspired,I became more confident in learning English and my English has improved a lot(回顧老師對(duì)自己的幫助).
I owe my progress to my English teacher,without whose unselfish guidance I wouldn't have made such rapid progress(高分句型二).I appreciate all she has done for me,which motivates me to pass her dedication and love on(感謝老師的幫助).In my daily life,I will do my part to help others in need.For example,I will offer directions to strangers who look lost and shovel snow off someone else's driveway(自己今后的打算).Here I appeal to everyone to assume the responsibility to show our gratitude to the world.It is due to thanking and caring for each other that we can enjoy the same sunshine and appreciate the same love under the same sky(呼吁每個(gè)人都要有感恩的情懷).
Thank you for listening.
點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文,應(yīng)該按所要求的內(nèi)容來(lái)寫,根據(jù)所列的內(nèi)容盡量以簡(jiǎn)明扼要的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá).這篇作文要求較靈活,題目中只是二個(gè)提綱,還要考生去充實(shí)里面的內(nèi)容,但是一定要圍繞提綱來(lái)寫,不能跑題.
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