Question

作文（滿分25分）

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，闡述水在人們生活中的重要性。

1.水是生命之源。沒有水，人與動(dòng)物將無法生存。

2.隨著人口增長(zhǎng)，工、農(nóng)業(yè)的發(fā)展，水污染嚴(yán)重，缺水問題成了一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問題。

3.應(yīng)積極采取措施解決缺水問題，如：充分利用水資源，避免污染，凈化雨水或海水等。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

提示：water shortage 缺水， pollute 污染，take measures采取措施，purify凈化,                                                   

                                                                           

                                                                            

                                                                            

 

Answer 1

【答案】

It is difficult to imagine what life would be like without water. Water is very important to all living things. There would be no life without water.

Water shortage has become a serious problem. One reason for that the growing population. The development of industry and agriculture need much more water. Another reason in that water is being wasted in some areas.

Therefore, we must take measures to solve this problem. First of all, we must make good use of water and avoid polluting it. In addition, we can get useful water through purifying water or sea water.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。