Question

1．近年來，很多父母選擇陪伴孩子讀書學(xué)習(xí)，陪讀已成為一種普遍現(xiàn)象．請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1．簡要描述陪讀現(xiàn)象；2．分析父母陪讀的原因（2至3個）；3．發(fā)表你對此的看法．

注意：詞數(shù)120詞左右．
Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School？
In recent years，many parents choose to accompany their children in studying，which has aroused a wide concern．
These parents are willing to leave their hometown，even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus．Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children．Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids．Meanwhile，it can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．Thus，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future．
Trust leads to independence．So it seems to me that parents should create room for children's growth and study in order to ensure their overall development．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于陪讀現(xiàn)象的議論文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一簡要描述陪讀現(xiàn)象；二分析父母陪讀的原因；三點明負面影響；四發(fā)表對此的看法．
高分句型：
1．In recent years，many parents choose to accompany their children in studying，which has aroused a wide concern．句子里Which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句內(nèi)容；arouse表示"激起，引發(fā)"．
近幾年，許多家長選擇陪讀，這一件事引起了廣泛地關(guān)注．
2．Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．句子里主語從句是what they've ignored；表語從句是that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．
但是，他們忽視的問題是這會讓學(xué)生養(yǎng)成依賴的習(xí)慣．

解答 Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School？
In recent years，many parents choose to accompany their children in studying，which has aroused a wide concern．【高分句型一】（簡要描述陪讀現(xiàn)象）
These parents are willing to leave their hometown，even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus．Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children．Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids．Meanwhile，it can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．（分析父母陪讀的原因）Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．【高分句型二】Thus，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future（點明負面影響）
Trust leads to independence．So it seems to me that parents should create room for children's growth and study in order to ensure their overall development．（發(fā)表對此的看法）

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本文是一篇英語短文，內(nèi)容齊全，有自己的觀點，同時結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，布局合理，使用高級句子．Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children．動詞不定式做目的狀語；另外，Meanwhile，Nevertheless，Thus，So，in order to的運用為文章增色添彩．