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7．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．作文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Recently，we have had a discussion about that China should make every effort to developing car industry．Opinions divided on the question．
60% of the students hold the belief that China should full develop car industry．It will not only promote economic development but provides more jobs to workers as well．Beside，cars can help to save time and improve people's life quality．On the other hand，40% think China should limit their car industry development．Otherwise，the city traffic will be much more heavier and more traffic accident will occur．As a result，new roads will be built but occupy more farmland．

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分析 本文主要介紹對中國發(fā)展汽車工業(yè)的不同意見．60%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為：應(yīng)當(dāng)充分發(fā)展汽車工業(yè)，這樣可以促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，提供更多的就業(yè)；40%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為：應(yīng)當(dāng)限制汽車工業(yè)的發(fā)展，城市繁忙的交通容易導(dǎo)致交通事故，更多的道路要建設(shè)，會占用更多的農(nóng)田．

解答 Recently，we have had a discussion about that China should make every effort to developing car industry．Opinions∧divided on the question．
60% of the students hold the belief that China should full develop car industry．It will not only promote economic development but provides more jobs to workers as well．Beside，cars can help to save time and improve people's life quality．On the other hand，40% think China should limit their car industry development．Otherwise，the city traffic will be much more heavier and more trafficaccident will occur．As a result，new roads will be built but occupy more farmland．
詳解：
1．that改為whether 考查連詞．a(chǎn)bout是介詞，后接意思完整的賓語從句時用連詞whether．
2．developing改為develop 考查動詞不定式．make every effort to意為"全力做某事，盡一切努力"，是固定搭配，后接動詞原形．
3．加are 考查動詞時態(tài)和語態(tài)．Opinions與divide之間是動賓關(guān)系，要用被動語態(tài)，且表示的是事實，要用一般現(xiàn)在時的被動語態(tài)．
4．full改為fully 考查副詞．develop是動詞，要用副詞修飾．
5．provides改為provide 考查動詞時態(tài)．not only…but also…意為"不僅…而且…"，是固定搭配，它前后連接兩個相同的語法成分，promote和provide都用動詞原形．
6．Beside改為besides 考查副詞．beside意為"在…旁邊；在…附近"，是介詞，besides意為"而且，也"，是副詞．此處應(yīng)是：而且，也．
7．their改為its 考查代詞．its指代前文提到的China．
8．去掉more 考查形容詞比較級．heavier是表示了形容詞比較級，more是多余的，要去掉．
9．a(chǎn)ccident改為accidents 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．a(chǎn)ccident是可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)上下文語境要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
10．but改為and 考查連詞．built和occupy之間表示順承關(guān)系，用連詞and．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．