Question

有些高中生有時與同學(xué)發(fā)生這樣或那樣的矛盾或沖突，這些問題會給大家?guī)�來煩惱甚至影響大家的學(xué)習(xí)。請你用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文，分析一下產(chǎn)生矛盾或沖突的原因，并談?wù)剳?yīng)如何正確地與同學(xué)相處。（關(guān)鍵詞：classmate conflicts）

 

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【答案】

Classmate conflicts among senior middle school students are often heard on campus over recent years. These conflicts make the excitement of campus life grow grey and have bad effects on both their living and learning.

        Classmate conflicts often rise from daily tidy things such as space to store books and notes. Different students have different personalities, which can tear classmates apart and sometimes even lead to serious conflicts. Besides, the fact that students have different attitudes towards certain issue is another factor causing these conflicts.

Classmate conflicts are harmful and needed to be settled. Though many people think that school discipline can soften the conflicts, I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a  more constructive role because it teaches students flexibility and the art of compromise. Meanwhile , communication contributes to the solution to this problem since many of these conflicts  result from misunderstanding.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇開放式作文，開放性作文給出了一個話題，討論如何和同學(xué)相處，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】這篇范文主旨明確，語句通順，句式多變： 如：These conflicts make the excitement of campus life grow grey and have bad effects on both their living and learning. 這句話里面有make+賓語+賓語補足語的結(jié)構(gòu)，Different students have different personalities, which can tear classmates apart and sometimes even lead to serious conflicts. 這句話里面有定語從句， the fact that students have different attitudes towards certain issue is another factor causing these conflicts.這句話里面有同位語從句， Though many people think that school discipline can soften the conflicts, I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a  more constructive role because it teaches students flexibility and the art of compromise. 這句話有讓步狀語從句，賓語從句，原因狀語從句， communication contributes to the solution to this problem since many of these conflicts  result from misunderstanding. 這句話里面用since連接原因狀語從句，還有文中使用Besides, Meanwhile ,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加通順。

考點：考查開放式作文