Question

11．本文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除和修改．增加：把缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯誤極其修改均限一詞.2．只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不記分．
Mr．Smith had a 8-year-old son named Tony，who enjoyed listening to music very much．So he bought a piano to Tony，hoping that he can become a famous pianist one day．The little boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seemed enjoy every minute of it．However，half a year later，he told his father that he was tiring of practising the piano．Heard this，Mr．Smith said，"Tony，it is one thing to be fond of listen to music，but it is another thing to perform skillful by yourself．You can never play the piano well even if you don't practise more．"

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹了Smith先生引導(dǎo)兒子Tony學(xué)鋼琴的情況．

解答 Mr．Smith had a 8-year-old son named Tony，who enjoyed listening to music very much．
So he bought a piano to Tony，hoping that he canbecome a famous pianist one day．The
little boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seemed∧enjoy every minute
of it．However，half a year later，he told his father that he  was tiring of practising the piano．
Heard this，Mr．Smith said，"Tony，it is one thing to be fond oflistento music，but it is another
thing to perform skillful by yourself．You can never play the piano well even if you don't practise more．"
詳解：
1：a 改為an    考查不定冠詞   此處用來修飾單數(shù)名詞son，表示泛指一個八歲的孩子，由于eight首字母的發(fā)音為元音/e?/，故用不定冠詞an．
2：to改為for   考查固定搭配    buy sth for sb 意為：給某人買某物；故用for．
3：can改為could   考查時態(tài)    根據(jù)上下文都使用了一般過去時可知，此處講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，故用could．
4：her改為his     考查人稱代詞的一致性   put one's heart into doing sth．意為：對…全力以赴，一心一意做…，由于此處的主語是那個男孩，故用his．
5：在seemed后加to  考查固定搭配   seem to do意為：好像做某事；這里指的是：他好象很享受每一分鐘；故在seemed后加to．
6：tiring改為tired        考查固定短語    be tired of 表示對…厭煩，厭倦做某事；此處的意思是：他告訴他的父親他厭倦了彈鋼琴；故用tired．
7：Heard改為Hearing   考查現(xiàn)在分詞    此處在句中作狀語，由于動詞hear與其邏輯主語Mr．Smith 是主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞Hearing．
8：listen改為listening      考查動名詞   此處用在介詞of之后作賓語，故用動名詞listening．
9：skillful改為skillfully    考查副詞    此處用來修飾動詞perform，故用副詞skillfully．
10：去掉even    考查句意理解以及從屬連詞   本句的意思是：如果你不多加練習(xí)，你就永遠(yuǎn)彈不好鋼琴；Even if 即使，if 如果，此處用來引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句，意為：如果，故去掉even．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯是集語法知識與語言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對詞匯、語法和語篇三要素的把握能力．錯誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯詞．常見的錯誤有：1 詞法錯誤，主要包括動詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見句法錯誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯誤．解答此類試題時，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．