13.如今,在車(chē)站、餐廳、商場(chǎng)等公共場(chǎng)所都能看見(jiàn)許多成人和小孩在不停地?cái)[弄手機(jī).現(xiàn)在,請(qǐng)你針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象,用英文寫(xiě)篇短文.短文詞數(shù)120詞左右,要點(diǎn)須包括:
1.描述現(xiàn)象    2.分析原因(至少兩條)   3.說(shuō)明影響      4.提出建議
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分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文,根據(jù)提示信息針對(duì)許多成人和小孩在不停地?cái)[弄手機(jī),這一現(xiàn)象,用英文寫(xiě)篇短文,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):分別從描述現(xiàn)象、分析原因(至少兩條)、說(shuō)明影響 和提出建議四個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,要點(diǎn)齊全,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練,有以下亮點(diǎn):
1.高級(jí)詞匯,如:make good use of,do harm to,focus on,prevent…from doing等的運(yùn)用十分恰當(dāng).
2.開(kāi)頭讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的使用,動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用使文章句子顯得靈活多變.
3.However,not only…but also,therefore等關(guān)聯(lián)詞的運(yùn)用使文章前后銜接自然.

解答 Nowadays no matter where we are,we can see many adults and children playing with their mobile phones.(高分句型一)This can happen at a bus stop,in a restaurant or at a supermarket.Why is that?
    We've probably got two reasons.The first reason is supposed to be that people are trying to make good use of time.And the second one may be that people show little interest in what's happening around them.However,focusing only on what's on our mobile phones may not only do harm to our eyesight,but also prevent us from communicating normally.(高分句型二)
    Therefore,some other ways to kill time are strongly suggested.For me,chatting with others is a good replacement of playing always with mobile phones.(高分句型三)

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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