Question

【題目】假設你叫李華,你的美國朋友Nancy即將來中國讀書。她來信請你對上學期間的交通方式提出建議�，F在，請你用英語回一封信，按以下各點答復。
1).建議騎自行車上學；
2).自行車是學生常用交通工具；
3).騎自行車的一些好處；
4).騎自行車需注意的問題。
注意：1). 詞數100左右，信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
2). 可根據內容要點適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。
Dear Nancy,
I'm very pleased to hear from you and you're welcome to study in China.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Nancy,

I'm very pleased to hear from you and you're welcome to study in China. As for the question about the transportation to and from school, I'd like to recommend your riding a bicycle. Here are some reasons.

Firstly, riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students, for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot. Next, it's convenient for you to ride and park your bicycle, no matter how busy the traffic could be.

Actually, bicycle-riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment. In this way, you'll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you're here.

Hopefully, what I've mentioned above can be helpful to you and wish you a fun time studyingin China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份給美國朋友Nancy，屬于提綱類作文。寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，要求考生根據所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。