Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤, 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）, 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改l0處, 多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Union is strength no matter when you’re facing difficulties or in a dilemma. Cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble.

There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate, refusing to work together with them. Therefore, it was no doubt that I was left alone, suffering from loneliness and failure. Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation. From then on, I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own. Surely cooperation made a great difference. Now I am getting well with my friends.

My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation, can we go beyond ourselves. As the saying go “United, we stand; divided, we fall.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】too---so

【2】classmate--- classmates

【3】it---there

【4】Unfortunately--- Fortunately-

【5】去掉the

【6】finish--- finishing

【7】getting后加on/along

【8】teach---taught

【9】with---to

【10】go---goes

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】too---so 此處考查so---that---引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，故把too---so。

【2】classmate--- classmates 此處考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)句意“我的同學(xué)”，應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把classmate--- classmates。

【3】it---there 考查固定句式：There is no doubt that---毫無疑問，故把it---there。

【4】Unfortunately--- Fortunately- 句意：很幸運，一位老師的合作價值觀給我留下了深刻印象。故把Unfortunately--- Fortunately。

【5】去掉the 固定搭配：turn to sb. for help向某人求助，故去掉the。

【6】finish--- finishing 固定搭配：have difficulty in doing在做某事上有困難，故把finish--- finishing。

【7】getting后加on/along 固定詞組：get on /along with與---相處。故在getting后加on/along。

【8】teach---taught 根據(jù)句意可知用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，故把teach---taught。

【9】with---to 考查固定搭配：attach ---to---把---依附于---，故把with---to。

【10】go---goes 句意：正如言語所說，---。此處應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是單數(shù)第三人稱，故把go---goes。

【學(xué)法指導(dǎo)】

1.在做短文改錯時一定要注意固定搭配、固定詞組、習(xí)慣用語和固定句式。比如第1小題too---so 此處考查so---that---引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，故把too---so。第3小題it---there 考查固定句式：There is no doubt that---毫無疑問，故把it---there。第6小題finish--- finishing 固定搭配：have difficulty in doing在做某事上有困難，故把finish--- finishing。第7小題getting后加on/along 固定詞組：get on /along with與---相處。故在getting后加on/along。第9小題with---to 考查固定搭配：attach ---to---把---依附于---，故把with---to。

2.在改錯時一定要注意大小寫。句子開頭的單詞第一個字母要大寫，學(xué)生很容易忽視。比如第4小題Unfortunately--- Fortunately句意：很幸運，一位老師的合作價值觀給我留下了深刻印象。故把Unfortunately--- Fortunately。