Question

6．請你根據(jù)下面圖畫寫一篇短文，描述其圖畫內(nèi)容并簡要談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />注意：詞數(shù)不超過60．

Answer 1

分析 本篇看圖寫作描述了家長開警車送孩子新生報到，讓人聯(lián)想到家長給孩子過多的保護．因此考生應(yīng)從深層次的含義入手，可以使用舉例，或者邏輯分析的方法來豐富作文的內(nèi)容．注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時，以及恰當?shù)倪B接詞．
重要短語：
 do harm to，對…有害，a good case in point，一個恰當?shù)睦�子，in summary，總之
高分句子：
As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．本句含有重要句型，it is necessary that，..是必要的

解答 The picture is so ironic that parents even drive the poice car to accompany their children to college．I don't think it's necessary for parents to accompany their children to college．（描述圖片）
Nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life．On one hand，these parents care and protect their children，however，on the other hand they may do harm to their children．（引出現(xiàn)象）
     As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．（高分句型）What's more，it is also a good way to let their children study in a boarding school for children must face something by their own，such as，their relationship with friends and student，their study and busy life and so on．A good case in point，parents may encourage their children to take part-time jobs during summer or winter holiday．By doing this，I believe，these children may become more independent，brave and responsible．（提出建議）
     In summary，spoiling children is no right．Parents should know better that an independent，responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better．（總結(jié)）

點評 要想使自己的書面表達得高分，首先要做到揚長避短．"揚長"就是發(fā)揮自身的優(yōu)勢，使用熟練掌握的句型，"避短"就是避開自己的弱點，盡量做到不犯錯誤或少犯錯誤，這是讀寫任務(wù)得分的關(guān)鍵所在．