假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

   I strong recommend that physical activities in children are encouraged. Parents who are supposed to make sure that their children get some form of exercise one hour daily because exercise is better for character building. When this comes to exercise,many people end up picturing heavy exercise at the gym. As matter of fact,exercise for children can mean going out and having funs. For example,they can walk or cycle to nearby places instead of take a bus. They can take their dogs out for 15-minute walks twice a day.Beside,children should be encouraged to make new friends for whom they can actively play sports.

1. I strong recommend ...   strong→strongly

2. . .. children are encouraged.   are→be

3. Parents who are…    去掉 who

4. . .. exercise is better for...   better→good

5. When this comes to ...   this→it

6. As matter of fact ...   As 后加 a

7. . .. and having funs.   funs→ fun

8. . .. take a bus.   take→taking

9. Beside,children should ....   Beside→Besides   

10. …for whom they can ...   for→with

題目來源：2016年英語周報(bào)高三新課標(biāo) > 第43期 2015-2016高三課標(biāo)

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