Question

目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對(duì)此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇征文稿。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

主要原因	考試偏多、偏難
不用功、懶惰
取悅父母、老師
個(gè)人看法	作弊不對(duì)，違反校規(guī)
要誠(chéng)實(shí)，努力學(xué)習(xí)
……（其他看法）

 

注意：

1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．短文標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3．詞數(shù)：100-120左右。

4．參考詞匯：作弊 cheat（v.）

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.　　______________________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools, we students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱作文，讓考生表達(dá)對(duì)考試做弊的觀點(diǎn)。本話(huà)題貼近考生的生活實(shí)際，考生有話(huà)可說(shuō)，要根據(jù)文字提示中的要點(diǎn)組織文章，選用合適的連接詞和相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯讓文章更有層次。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，要清晰第表明自己反對(duì)作弊的態(tài)度，并說(shuō)明理由。如作弊是對(duì)別人的不公平，是在欺騙自己等等都可以寫(xiě)進(jìn)去。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)作文寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)作文寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要完備，不能有遺漏。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的靈活運(yùn)用，多種句型的靈活穿插，高級(jí)詞匯的多種變化和連接詞的恰當(dāng)聯(lián)系。最后可以使用諺語(yǔ)進(jìn)行潤(rùn)色提高。