Question

8．假設(shè)你是李華，學校要求你們下周二下午去聽一個"感動中國"人物孫家棟關(guān)于航天知識的講座，你因故不能參加．請給你們班主任Harris發(fā)一封郵件請假．
注意：1．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100左右；
Dear Mr．Harris，
I am Li Hua．Deeply sorry for not being able to attend the lecture on space next Tuesday afternoon．I am writing to you in an effort to ask for a leave．（寫信的目的）
To be honest．I am dying to seize the opportunity to learn more about space through the lecture given by Sun Jiadong，one of the ten Touching-China Role Models．However，it is on the same day that I am going to participate in my interview for admission into Beijing University for which I have prepared for a long time．Meanwhile，I want to make up for the missing lecture．Would it be possible for me to have my classmates record the lecture？If so，I can enjoy the lecture later．（請假的原因，以及補救請求）
Hoping to have your permission．（希望批準）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封請假信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一寫信的目的；二請假的原因，以及補救請求；三希望批準．
高分句型：
1．Deeply sorry for not being able to attend the lecture on space next Tuesday afternoon句子里省略了主語和系動詞I'm；not being able to 是動名詞做賓語；attend the lecture 表示"聽講座"．
很抱歉不能參加周二下午的航天知識的講座．
2．However，it is on the same day that I am going to participate in my interview for admission into Beijing University for which I have prepared for a long time．句子里it is on the same day that 是強調(diào)句式，強調(diào)時間狀語on the same day；participate in 表示"參加"；which引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞my interview for admission into Beijing University．
但是，我為之準備了很長時間的北京大學錄取面試在同一天進行．

解答 Dear Mr．Harris，
      I am Li Hua．Deeply sorry for not being able to attend the lecture on space next Tuesday afternoon．【高分句型一】I am writing to you in an effort to ask for a leave．（寫信的目的）
      To be honest．I am dying to seize the opportunity to learn more about space through the lecture given by Sun Jiadong，one of the ten Touching-China Role Models．However，it is on the same day that I am going to participate in my interview for admission into Beijing University for which I have prepared for a long time．【高分句型二】Meanwhile，I want to make up for the missing lecture．Would it be possible for me to have my classmates record the lecture？If so，I can enjoy the lecture later．（請假的原因，以及補救請求）
     Hoping to have your permission．（希望批準）
   Yours，
   Li Hua

點評 考查開放類作文．
寫作文時，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點．不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點不全．通過對眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內(nèi)容有關(guān)的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關(guān)的要點，列出寫作提綱．