Question

假設(shè)你是李華，請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文給瑪麗回一封電子郵件，建議她來你所在的學(xué)校作交換生。理由是：1．你校每年都接納交換生；

2．學(xué)校條件好，各種設(shè)施好，有圖書館，電子閱覽室……；

3．課外活動豐富多彩；   4．你校學(xué)生英語水平好，易于交流；

5．特別是老師好，教法生動有趣

注意：

1．可根據(jù)要求加以必要發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；   2．詞數(shù)為100左右；

參考詞匯：設(shè)施：facility  電子閱覽室：electro-reading-room

Hi Mary,

Nice to read your e-mail today. It’s very kind of you to give me encouragement, l owe a lot to you for your help.

As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should suggest              _____                                                                                 

 

Hope you’ll choose my school.

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Mary,                                                                     

Nice to read your e-mail today. It’s very kind of you to give me encouragement; I owe a lot to you for your help.                                                    

As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should recommend my school. The following are the reasons.

First, exchange students are welcomed in my school; besides, we have first-class facilities: the labs, modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students, offering us places to broaden our views while on the sports grounds and in gymnasiums we surely can get much fun and make many friends. After-class we have varies of activities which provide us with opportunities to improve ourselves.

And the most important is that we have the best teachers as well as the best schoolmates. The teachers are kind and ready to offer help. In their unique ways of teaching, they often make their class lively and interesting. We students are encouraged to speak English both in and out of class, thus I do believe that you won’t have any difficulty in communicating with us.

Isn’t the information above enough for you to make a decision? If you come to my school, I think I can serve as a good link between you and other students as well as the teachers.        Hope you’ll like my school                                        

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，介紹你校交換生的情況以及你校的一些基本信息。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作

點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。