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11．據(jù)最新一項調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)，"低頭族"正以星火燎原之勢蔓延．假定你是李華，請根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語給《二十一世紀報》編輯部寫一封讀者來信，以引起社會各界對此的廣泛關(guān)注．
1．描述這一現(xiàn)象；2．分析其原因及弊端；=3．你認為該如何改變現(xiàn)狀．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．但可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：低頭族phubbing
Dear editor，
I'm writing to you about a common phenomenon to draw it to the public attention．
As is often the case，when people are having meals，waiting for buses or even walking along streets，they are always addicted to their phones，heads hanging down，completely ignoring others．
The reason for the increasing number of phubbings everywhere is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to do nearly everything，such as playing mobile games，shopping online and keeping in touch with friends through QQ．However，too much exposure to phones is harmful for their health and safety．Moreover，people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them．
Personally，people should wisely use their phones to help with their work and study．Meanwhile they'd better care more about their family and friends rather than phones．
Best wishes to you!．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
As is often the case，when people are having meals，waiting for buses or even walking along streets，they are always addicted to their phones，heads hanging down，completely ignoring others
通常情況下，當人們在吃飯、等候公共汽車或甚至走在路上，他們總是沉迷于自己的手機，頭垂下來，完全無視別人．
高分句型二：
However，too much exposure to phones is harmful for their health and safety．Moreover，people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them．
然而，過多接觸手機對健康和安全的危害．此外，沉溺手機將失敗與周圍的人溝通．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm writing to you about a common phenomenon to draw it to the public attention．
As is often the case，when people are having meals，waiting for buses or even walking along streets，they are always addicted to their phones，heads hanging down，completely ignoring others（高分句型一）．
The reason for the increasing number of phubbings everywhere is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to do nearly everything，such as playing mobile games，shopping online and keeping in touch with friends through QQ．However，too much exposure to phones is harmful for their health and safety．Moreover，people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them（高分句型二）．
Personally，people should wisely use their phones to help with their work and study．Meanwhile they'd better care more about their family and friends rather than phones．
Best wishes to you!
Yours truly，
Li Hu

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．