Question

1．假設你是李華，你的美國筆友Tom來信談及他最近在學習中國書法過程中困難重重．請根據(jù)以下提示為其寫封回信，告之怎樣克服困難，并祝他學習進步．
1．請教老師；
2．反復練習；
3．永不言棄．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：書法-calligraphy．
Dear Tom，
I'm sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese calligraphy．In fact，you are not alone．Many people，including many of my classmates，feel it hard to write with a writing brush．（高分句型一）
However，it is very important to learn the artistic handwriting of Chinese characters．Learning Chinese calligraphy is very helpful in learning more about Chinese culture and history．（高分句型二）Besides，written Chinese is well-known for its beauty．If you want to be a good user of the writing brush，first you have to be patient．And second，you have to keep practicing．Last but not least，you should pay attention to the use of calligraphy models．Just be confident and practice hard and you'll be an expert in Chinese calligraphy．（高分句型三）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封信．第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封信件；你的美國筆友Tom來信談及他最近在學習中國書法過程中困難重重．請根據(jù)以下提示為其寫封回信，告之怎樣克服困難，并祝他學習進步，主要內(nèi)容包括：請教老師；反復練習；永不言棄．人稱使用第二人稱，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時．
第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：including（包括），the artistic handwriting（藝術書寫方式），helpful（有幫助的），Chinese culture and history（中國文化和歷史），be well-known for（因為…而著名），be patient（有耐心的），keep practicing（保持訓練），confident（有信心的）等．
第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題．
第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的．
【亮點說明】
范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當．作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如插入語Many people，including many of my classmates，feel it hard to write with a writing brush．；祈使句Just be confident and practice hard and you'll be an expert in Chinese calligraphy．；非謂語動詞Learning Chinese cal-ligraphy is very helpful in learning more about Chinese culture and history．．全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力．另外，however，besides，first，second，last but not least等詞組的使用，使得文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩．

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese calligraphy．In fact，you are not alone．Many people，including many of my classmates，feel it hard to write with a writing brush．（高分句型一）
       However，it is very important to learn the artistic handwriting of Chinese characters．Learning Chinese calligraphy is very helpful in learning more about Chinese culture and history．（高分句型二）Besides，written Chinese is well-known for its beauty．If you want to be a good user of the writing brush，first you have to be patient．And second，you have to keep practicing．Last but not least，you should pay attention to the use of calligraphy models．Just be confident and practice hard and you'll be an expert in Chinese calligraphy．（高分句型三）
       Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．