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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

When I was a small child，my parents didn’t have many money and I had very few Christmas gifts. My cousin was ten and he had gone out singing Christmas songs and made quite a bit money. Without tell anyone he went to the shop and spent almost every penny of his money in a teddy bear. Then he was used the change to buy a little necklace with a glass charming (迷人的) heart on them. He came to my house and told my parents what he had bought these things for me as Christmas gift. Twenty-five years later the teddy bear has been thrown away, but I even have the little necklace in my jewelry box to remind me of my cousin kindness.

Answer 1

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【解析】考查形容詞。修飾不可數(shù)名詞應使用much，故將many改為much。

考查固定短語。a bit of一點，修飾不可數(shù)名詞，故填加of。

考查動名詞。介詞后應使用動名詞，故將tell改為telling。

考查固定用法。spend time on sth.在某事上花費時間或spend time in doing sth.花費時間做某事。故將介詞in改為on。

考查語態(tài)。句意：然后他使用零錢買個一條項鏈，有一顆迷人的心形玻璃鑲嵌在上面。故去掉was。

考查代詞。指代前面提到necklace，故將代詞them改為it。

考查賓語從句。賓語從句中不缺少句子成分，故將what改為that或去掉。

考查名詞復數(shù)。根據(jù)“these things”，故將gift改為gifts。

考查副詞。even甚至，即使；still仍然。根據(jù)句意：二十五年后，泰迪熊被扔掉了，但是那條項鏈仍然在我的珠寶盒里。根據(jù)題意，故將even改為still。

考查形容詞性物主代詞。修飾名詞kindness，應使用形容詞性物主代詞，故將cousin改為cousin’s。