Question

IV 寫作(共2題，滿分40分)
第一節(jié)基礎(chǔ)寫作(共1題，滿分15分)
你的筆友William回復(fù)你的電子郵件告訴你英國(guó)高中生課余時(shí)間可以打工，其內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

英國(guó)高中生	1. 可以打工，每天不超過(guò)三小時(shí)，晚上不得遲于七點(diǎn)； 2. 一星期18小時(shí)以內(nèi)。
William的看法	1. 可獲得生活中一些技能，如填表、應(yīng)對(duì)面試和與人相處； 2. 增強(qiáng)自信和獨(dú)立性，學(xué)會(huì)如何理財(cái)； 3. 有利學(xué)習(xí)和工作責(zé)任心。

[寫作內(nèi)容]
假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息，以William的口吻將這些信息轉(zhuǎn)寫成一封信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 英國(guó)15歲以上的高中生課余可以打工；
2. 高中生課余打工的時(shí)限規(guī)定；
3. 你(William)的看法。
[寫作要求]    
1.只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容；
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已寫出，不講入總句數(shù)。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]    句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性、連貫。
Dear Li Hua,
Very glad to have received your email. Now I’ll tell you what I am doing during my unlimited time these days.
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Best wishes to you and looking forwards to your early reply.
Yours,
William Dickens

Answer 1

[one possible version]
Dear Li Hua,
Very glad to have received your email. Now I’ll tell you what I am doing during my unlimited time these days. In the UK, any secondary student over 15 years old can get a job legally in his unlimited time. Students, who can work as long as they work no more than three hours a day and 18 hours a week during the school year, can’t work past 7:00 pm during school year.
I guess, first of all, jobs can teach teenagers work skills they will need their whole lives, such as how to fill out an application, how to interview well and how to get along with co-workers and superiors. What’s more, jobs can help us teens not only feel more confident and independent but also develop a sense of responsibility for our courses and work. The most important of all, Jobs help us teens learn to manage our money in our life.
Best wishes to you and looking forwards to your early reply.
Yours,
William Dickens

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