Question

5．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
"We live in Beijing where 175days of the year are smogs，and I fear that my daughter will ask me one day'What is blue sky？'As a mother and journalist，I needed to ask where smog comes from and what we can do．"
Chai Jing，a former CCTV journalist said on the release of her documentary Under the Dome（穹頂之下）．When her unborn daughter was diagnosed as having tumor（腫瘤），possibly as a result of the air pollution，Chai left CCTV and decided to make the video using her own money．The documentary，released for free online viewing on March 1，2015，was watched more than 150million times by March 3．
In the documentary，Chai talked to scientists and researchers and concluded that the burning of coal and oil is mainly to blame for the country's severe smog．She also explored the consequences of the air pollution and ways to solve it．
The 100-minute video，which has been widely spread online，has won both praise and criticism．Some say it has helped raise the awareness of ordinary Chinese and mobilized them to live simply to help reduce the air pollution while others argue over the correctness of the results given by Chai after a series of experiments．

寫作內(nèi)容
1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個詞就"霧霾"談?wù)勀愕目捶�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）你對柴靜的行為有何評價；
（2）霧霾給你的生活或?qū)W習(xí)帶來的影響；
（3）你認(rèn)為普通公民怎樣做才能有助于減輕霧霾．
寫作要求
1．在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．
ChaiJing，a Chinese journalist，recently released her self-funded documentary，inwhich she explored the causes and effects of smog in China and suggested some solutions．The documentary spread quickly online，arousing both applause and criticism．
Iadmire Chai greatly for she made the video independently by selecting thetopic，doing the research and organizing the reports at her own expense．Neverwill we know how much effort and risks it took her to produce such an appealingdocumentary．
Sadly，I am also one of the victims of smog when it comes to the consequences broughtby smog．Last semester I suffered from a nose problem which made it difficultfor me to breathe especially after exercise．Having seen the doctor quite a fewtimes，I became aware that the smoggy weather was held responsible for mymisery．
Severeas smog is，there are a number of things that can be done to reduce it andevery one of us ordinary citizens can help address the problem．Forone thing，we can decrease energy use by turning off the electrical appliancesin our houses if possible．For another，knowing that the emissions from carscontribute greatly to smog，we should choose walking，cycling，car pooling orpublic transportation instead of driving unnecessarily．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照"三段式"模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或列舉事例．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時態(tài)一般用一般過去時或一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語：releasesth  （發(fā)布…），arousesth  （激起，引起…），admire sb greatly for…（因…欽佩某人），whenit comes to…（當(dāng)談到，涉及到…），suffer from…（遭受…），at one's own expense（某人自費），be responsiblefor…（對…負(fù)責(zé)），addressthe problem （解決問題），contributeto（導(dǎo)致，促成）．

解答 ChaiJing，a Chinese journalist，recently released her self-funded documentary，inwhich she explored the causes and effects of smog in China and suggested some solutions．【高分句型】The documentary spread quickly online，arousing both applause and criticism．（概括）
Iadmire Chai greatly for she made the video independently by selecting thetopic，doing the research and organizing the reports at her own expense．【高分句型】Never will we know how much effort and risks ittook her to produce such an appealing documentary．【高分句型】（對柴靜行為的評價）
Sadly，I am also one of the victims of smog when it comes to the consequences broughtby smog．Last semester I suffered from a nose problem which made it difficultfor me to breathe especially after exercise．Having seen the doctor quite a fewtimes，I became aware that the smoggy weather was held responsible for mymisery．【高分句型】（霧霾對自己生活學(xué)習(xí)的影響）
Severeas smog is，there are a number of things that can be done to reduce it andevery one of us ordinary citizens can help address the problem．【高分句型】For one thing，we can decrease energy use byturning off the electrical appliances in our houses if possible．For another，knowing that the emissions from cars contribute greatly to smog，we shouldchoose walking，cycling，car pooling or public transportation instead ofdriving unnecessarily．（公民對減輕霧霾能做的舉措）

點評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．