Question

下面這幅照片展現(xiàn)了志愿者慈善義賣活動（Charity Bazaar）的情景。請根據(jù)你對照片的理解用英語寫一篇短文。你的短文應該包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．簡述照片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動作等等；
2．結合自身實際，談談你的感想；
3．舉例說明你能為公益事業(yè)做點什么，并陳述原因。
Your help will make a difference!
注意：
1．可參照圖片下面的文字及文章開頭所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象。
2．詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。
Volunteers in high schools help our society in many ways. They devote their time and effort to help people in need.

Answer 1

Volunteers in high schools help our society in many ways. They devote their time and effort to help people in need.
The picture above illustrates a common scene that can be seen in many campuses, where volunteers hold charity bazaars to collect money for the needed. They put their books, toys or even music players on desks for sale. These stalls can always attract large numbers of students, who buy the things not just out of love of the items, but also out of their loving hearts.
This picture reminds me of children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty, and of senior citizens in nursing houses who need better care. It is everyone’s responsibility to help make the world a better place to live in.
Like the volunteers in the picture, I also have a willing heart to help people. I have every hope to visit the house for orphans, to donate my money to those who are in need and most importantly, to help the people around me whenever necessary.（154）

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，談論的是志愿者慈善義賣活動。除了說明圖畫內(nèi)容，還要結合自身實際，談談你的感想，并舉例說明你能為公益事業(yè)做點什么，并陳述原因。寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】The picture above illustrates a common scene that can be seen in many campuses, where volunteers hold charity bazaars to collect money for the needed. 這句話里面有兩個定語從句， These stalls can always attract large numbers of students, who buy the things not just out of love of the items, but also out of their loving hearts.這句話有定語從句也有not only…，but also…這個詞組， It is everyone’s responsibility to help make the world a better place to live in. 這句話里面有it做形式主語， I have every hope to visit the house for orphans, to donate my money to those who are in need and most importantly, to help the people around me whenever necessary.這句話里面有不定式還有狀語從句的省略式。