Question

假設(shè)你是學(xué)生李華，英國學(xué)生Peter去年來你校學(xué)習(xí)，一年學(xué)習(xí)期滿準(zhǔn)備新年前回
國。請(qǐng)你代表全班同學(xué)寫一篇?dú)g送辭，內(nèi)容包括：
1.同學(xué)關(guān)系融洽；
2.英語學(xué)習(xí)氛圍更濃；
3.保持聯(lián)系，歡迎再來。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。（不包括已給出的首句詞數(shù)）
2.文章應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)。
Dear friends,
Today we are having a farewell party to honor our friend Peter.
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Li Hua

Answer 1

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Possible version:
Dear friends,
Today we are having a farewell party to honor our friend Peter. He is going back to his homeland before the New Year. In the past year Peter and all of us have been on good terms. Also we have helped each other and become good friends. Thank you Peter for being a part of this class! We have a better atmosphere of English learning so we have become more interested in English and have made great progress. We really appreciate your help and friendship.
Dear Peter, we will miss you and we all hope that we can keep in touch. Expecting you to come back some day. Good luck, Peter. May you have a pleasant journey home!

解析試題分析：這是一篇?dú)g送辭，所以要用第一人稱來寫。需要些的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Dear Peter, we will miss you and we all hope that we can keep in touch.這里含有一個(gè)賓語從句。
考點(diǎn)：歡送辭類書面表達(dá)