Question

17．你校英語(yǔ)外籍教師Mike暑假期間準(zhǔn)備在本地開(kāi)一家西餐小店，要招若干名高中生為無(wú)酬打工人員．下面是招聘啟事：
Wanted!
4 middle school students
Do service work and act as translators
Healthy and helpful
Contact：wfpub@gmail．com
假定你叫李華，愿意應(yīng)聘．請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封電子郵件，介紹自己，并說(shuō)明你愿意應(yīng)聘的理由．詞數(shù)100左右．開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mike，
I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job．I'm a student of SeniorⅢfrom Wuhan．I've been very interested in English and intend to enter a foreign language college after I graduate from high school．（高分句型一）I shall be free during the summer vocation，so I decide to find something interesting to do and I think that's the very thing I like．（高分句型二）
Though I shall get no pay for the job，I'll be able to get some valuable job experience as well as practise my spoken English by acting as a translator for you．Besides，I'm so strong and healthy，and I really enjoy making friends with others，especially communicating with foreigners．
I'll greatly appreciate it if I'm offered the chance，and I'm sure I can be of great help for you．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校英語(yǔ)外籍教師Mike暑假期間準(zhǔn)備在本地開(kāi)一家西餐小店，要招若干名高中生為無(wú)酬打工人員，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：愿意應(yīng)聘．，介紹自己，并說(shuō)明你愿意應(yīng)聘的理由 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣；intend to do想要做某事；graduate from從…畢業(yè)；as well as 也，和；Besides另外；be of great help 非常有幫助；be able to 能夠做某事；Look forward to盼望；
I've been very interested in English and intend to enter a foreign language college after I graduate from high school．（高分句型一）
I shall be free during the summer vocation，so I decide to find something interesting to do and I think that's the very thing I like．（高分句型二）
I'll greatly appreciate it if I'm offered the chance，and I'm sure I can be of great help for you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
       I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job．I'm a student of SeniorⅢfrom Wuhan．I've been very interested in English and intend to enter a foreign language college after I graduate from high school．（高分句型一）I shall be free during the summer vocation，so I decide to find something interesting to do and I think that's the very thing I like．（高分句型二）
      Though I shall get no pay for the job，I'll be able to get some valuable job experience as well as practise my spoken English by acting as a translator for you．Besides，I'm so strong and healthy，and I really enjoy making friends with others，especially communicating with foreigners．
      I'll greatly appreciate it if I'm offered the chance，and I'm sure I can be of great help for you．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to your early reply!
                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．