Question

4．請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章．
Cleanliness is important to academic success at one Chinese university where compulsory labor is part of a program designed to award class credits while teaching students with proper moral values．
During winter，the sky is still dark at 6：30a．m．when the first-year students in Trade and Management College in Zhengzhou begin sweeping the 165-acre campus and it can take up to an hour．
Mr．Sun，the university official，said labor is good for building character and promotes"the spirit of hard work．"Some students also claim that they are always proud of the clean campus．They never litter because they've been through the labor and understand that they should respect the fruits of labor of others．
Some students，however，are against it because they feel the demands of the cleaning program are a distraction．Some often show up late and hungry to their morning classes after rushing to sweep the campus and clean their rooms．
寫作內(nèi)容
1．用約30個單詞寫出上文概要；
2．用約120個單詞發(fā)表你的觀點，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）支持或反對這個學校的做法；
（2）用2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點．
寫作要求
1．可以支持文中任一觀點，但必須提供理由或論據(jù)；
2．闡述觀點或提供論據(jù)時，不能直接引用原文語句；
3．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；
4．不必寫標題．
評分標準
內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當．
OneuniversityinZhengzhoudesignsaprogramwherestudentsmustcleanthecampuseverydayandrelatesittoclasscredits．Somepeoplesupporttheprogramwhileothersdonot．
Generally，I am in favor of the practice．To begin with，through their effort，studentsprovide a clean and comfortable environment，which，as a result，is anassurance of their successful academic life．Moreover，learning and labor cannot only serve to build students'character but also contribute positively tostudents developing healthy routines and good sanitation habits．Last but notleast，by enjoying the fruits of other's labor，students will develop theawareness of gratitude and regard labor as a matter of honor．
In short，carrying out the cleaning program is crucial．Thesignificance for students of participating in it means more than academicsuccess．It is part of moral education and benefits students as well as thecampus．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務型寫作，這類作文可按照"三段式"模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或列舉事例．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時態(tài)一般用一般過去時或一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語：relates A to B （A事物與B事物有關），be in favor of sth （支持某事…），as a result （所以），serve to do…（用來做…），contribute to…（有利于，促成…），develop the awareness of …（培養(yǎng)…的意識），carry out  （實施），participate in…（參加）．

解答 One university in Zhengzhou designs a program where students must clean the campus every day and relates it to class credits．Some people support the program while others do not．（概括）
  Generally，I am in favor of the practice．To begin with，through their effort，studentsprovide a clean and comfortable environment，which，as a result，is anassurance of their successful academic life．【高分句型】Moreover，learning and labor can not onlyserve to build students'character but also contribute positively to studentsdeveloping healthy routines and good sanitation habits．Last but not least，byenjoying the fruits of other's labor，students will develop the awareness ofgratitude and regard labor as a matter of honor．（支持學校的做法及闡述理由）
In short，carrying out the cleaning program is crucial．【高分句型】The significance forstudents of participating in it means more than academic success．It is part ofmoral education and benefits students as well as the campus．（自己的觀點）

點評 讀寫任務型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達內(nèi)容，其中準確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關鍵詞；重構主題句；重組支持句．