Question

6．上周《佛山日報》社對佛山市南海區(qū)某中學(xué)的2000名現(xiàn)行高中生就如何度暑假的方式進行了一項問卷調(diào)查，其結(jié)果如下：

度假方式	接近86%左右的高中生不愿意呆在家閑著，而選擇做兼職來度暑假．
工作地點	離家較近、工作環(huán)境相對舒適的快餐店、報社、超市等．
兼職原因	（1）勞逸結(jié)合，釋放學(xué)習(xí)的壓力； （2）賺些零用錢，減輕家庭的經(jīng)濟壓力； （3）獲得更多的社會和實踐經(jīng)驗，增強在未來生活和事業(yè)中的自信．

[寫作要求]1．只能用五個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；
2．本文開頭已給出，不計算在5個句子中．
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．[參考詞匯]報社 newspaper departments         提高，增強 enhance  Last week，F(xiàn)oshan Daily made a survey among 2000 senior high school students coming from Foshan city on how to spend their approaching summer holidays，and the result is as follows_____________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 本文為調(diào)查問卷的總結(jié)．
寫作主題為：高中生如何度暑假
寫作要點包括：1，度假方式；2，工作地點；3，兼職原因．
注意要點包括：只能用五個句子．

解答 Last week，F(xiàn)oshan Daily made a survey among 2000 senior high school students coming from Foshan city on how to spend their approaching summer holidays，and the result is as follows．Surprisingly，nearly 86% students prefer to do part-time jobs rather than stay at home for their summer holidays．For convenience，they'd like to choose comfortable working places which are close to their home like fast restaurants，newspaper departments and supermarkets．As for the reasons，they think doing part-time jobs is the combination of work and rest，which will release themselves completely．Meanwhile，they can also earn pocket money by hand，reducing the economic pressure of their families．Most importantly，it's beneficial for them to gain more social and practical experience so as to enhance their self-confidence in their future life and career．

點評 考生需根據(jù)所給的表格信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．