Question

【題目】你校學(xué)生會決定舉辦一場以“我有一個夢想”為主題的演講比賽。作為即將上大學(xué)的高三學(xué)生，請你根據(jù)提示寫一篇包含一下內(nèi)容的演講稿。

1.你的夢想 2.說明理由 3.如何實現(xiàn)

注意：1.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

2.文中不得使用真實校名和人名

3.詞數(shù)：120左右

4.文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

I have a dream

Dear fellow students,

I am so pleased to have a chance to share my dream with you here.

That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a dream

Dear fellow students,

I am so pleased to have a chance to share my dream with you here. It has always my best wish to be a teacher. I still remember how I was taught to spell my first word. I never forget how I was encouraged to raise new hope when in despair. My road to maturity is dotted with guidance from teachers, without which it would have been impossible for me to smooth away the difficulties and discomforts. What the teachers do and say influences me so much that the dream of becoming a teacher has been deeply rooted in my mind.

As the saying goes, teachers are engineers of human soul. Being a teacher demands a lot, including rich knowledge, patience, kindness, devotion, etc. I’ve made up my mind to major in education after graduation from high school. Therefore, I’m going to work hard, train my character and develop good qualities. I believe I’ll realize the dream through my constant efforts.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：英語演講稿是近年來比較喜歡出現(xiàn)在在英語書面表達中的一種形式，遇到演講稿這類作文題，認真研究所給提綱不能遺漏提綱要點，更不能錯誤理解提綱的意思。確定各段的主題句，主題句結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，即結(jié)構(gòu)符合語法規(guī)則；意義要完整，即主題句是一個符合邏輯的完整句子。段落寫作應(yīng)圍繞自己列好的主題句進行，在寫作過程中可稍加調(diào)整。要符合演講的語氣，要注意動詞的時態(tài)及主語的人稱。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語be encouraged to do 被鼓勵做某事；make up one’s mind to do 下定決心做某事；realize the dream實現(xiàn)夢想；I never forget how I was encouraged to raise new hope when in despair這個句子how引導(dǎo)forget的賓語從句；As the saying goes, teachers are engineers of human soul這個句子as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；My road to maturity is dotted with guidance from teachers, without which it would have been impossible for me to smooth away the difficulties and discomforts這個句子without which引導(dǎo)定語從句；