學(xué)生李明到華山中學(xué)上學(xué)已經(jīng)半個(gè)學(xué)期了。現(xiàn)在很焦慮 (anxiety)。原因如下1.高中的課程內(nèi)容加深，變難，因?yàn)闆]有好的學(xué)習(xí)方法，學(xué)起來很吃力2. 因?yàn)殪t腆（shy）,不敢問老師問題。3.原來學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)優(yōu)勢已經(jīng)不復(fù)存在，導(dǎo)致學(xué)習(xí)信心下降。

假設(shè)你是心理老師裴老師，請給他一封建議信，幫他消除焦慮感，讓他對華山的學(xué)習(xí)充滿自信。（可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，120詞以內(nèi)，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，須使用以下連接詞(first of all , what’s more, in addition, /besides …）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

首先（First of all），做出科學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃…

此外（What’s more），上課要專心聽講，做好筆記…

還有（In addition），這兒的老師都很熱心，善良，遇到難題向他們求教時(shí)千萬別害羞…

另外（Besides）,請記住，并非你不優(yōu)秀（excellent）,而是你有了更多競爭者（competitor）。你要做的就是更加努力地學(xué)習(xí)。相信你自己，你能做到的。(not that …but…)

Dear Li Ming,

I am sorry to hear about your anxiety. Don’t worry ! It’s normal for some students who have studied in Hua Shan High School. I’d like to share my tips with you.

First of all ,

What’s more ,

In addition,

Besides, please remember: not that

but

I hope my tips will help you feel confident.

Best wishes

Ms Pei

 

Dear Li Ming,

I am sorry to hear about your anxiety. Don’t worry ! It’s normal for some students who have studied in Hua Shan High School. I’d like to share my tips with you.

First of all , you should make a careful and scientific study plan. According to the plan , your goal is very clear. You know what you do, how to do, when to do.

What’s more , Listen to your teachers carefully in class. Remember to preview the lesson and make notes and review them after class.

In addition, all the teachers here are kind and warm-hearted. Don’t be shy to turn to your teachers for help when you come across some difficult problems from any subjects.

Besides ,please remember not that you are not excellent but there are better students in the campus. What you should do is to study harder. Believe yourself. You can do it.

I hope my tips will help you feel better.

Best wishes

Ms Pei

【解析】

試題分析：

題目要求寫一封建議信，幫他消除焦慮感，讓他對華山的學(xué)習(xí)充滿自信。首先，做出科學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃；此外上課要專心聽講，做好筆記；還有，這兒的老師都很熱心，善良，遇到難題向他們求教時(shí)千萬別害羞。你要做的就是更加努力地學(xué)習(xí)。相信你自己，你能做到的。適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，120詞以內(nèi)，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，須使用以下連接詞first of all , what’s more, in addition, /besides …

范文切合主題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好�；緹o語言錯(cuò)誤。

亮點(diǎn)說明：

范文注意使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，對時(shí)態(tài)有較好的把握；

范文注意使用first of all , what’s more, in addition, /besides …等來銜接句子和段落，表示事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間順序，使作文更有條理，做到了行文連貫。

范文使用了很多固定短語：be sorry to hear about, don’t worry等，使作文內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)。

考點(diǎn)：材料類作文

 

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