10．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改僅限一詞．
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Dear Ms．Smith，
I am secretary of the City Student Union （CSU）．We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city．This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai．More than 1，000painting will be on show，but school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event．As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students，we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition．We would be grateful when you could join them that day．Looking forward to hear from you soon．
Yours
Li Ming．

分析 Li Ming是城市大學(xué)生聯(lián)盟的秘書，這是他寫給Smith的一封信，邀請(qǐng)Smith來參加城市的大學(xué)生藝術(shù)展．

解答 Dear Ms．Smith，
I am secretary of the City Student Union （CSU）．We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in∧city．This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai．More than 1，000painting will be on show，but school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event．As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students，we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition．We would be grateful when you could join them that day．Looking forward to hear from you soon．
Yours
Li Ming．
詳解：
1．were改為are；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本文基本時(shí)態(tài)用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，此處也要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)陳述一個(gè)事實(shí)．
2．city前面加the；考查冠詞，這里用定冠詞the表示特指．
3．This改為It；考查代詞，此處需要指代的是an art exhibition，故用代詞it．
4．painting改為paintings；考查名詞，painting是可數(shù)名詞，前面有More than 1，000修飾，所以要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
5．but改為and；考查連詞，結(jié)合上下文分析，此處前后屬于并列關(guān)系，故用連詞and．
6．popularly改為popular；考查形容詞，此處用形容詞形式popular作系動(dòng)詞are的表語．
7．去掉for；考查動(dòng)詞，invite此處意為"邀請(qǐng)"，是及物動(dòng)詞，后面直接跟賓語，故把for去掉．
8．when改為if；考查條件狀語從句，分析句意為"如果你能加入我們，我們將會(huì)非常感激"，故用if引導(dǎo)一個(gè)條件狀語從句．
9．them改為us；考查人稱代詞，結(jié)合上下文分析，此處的人稱代詞英語主語we保持一致，故用us作動(dòng)詞join的賓語．
10．hear改為hearing；考查非謂語動(dòng)詞，在短語look forward to 中，to是介詞，后跟名詞或動(dòng)名詞形式．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)首先快速閱讀短文，了解短文基本大意，確定文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)，再運(yùn)用語法，詞匯，習(xí)慣性短語等基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)進(jìn)一步分析各個(gè)句子，找出文中的錯(cuò)誤加以修改．

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