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11．請你改正下面短文中的錯誤．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．3．請在答題卡上指定的地方作答．
My friend Dick was seven years old，and her sister Katherine was five．One day their mother take them to their aunt，s to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes．They played for a hour，and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen．She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said，"Dick，cut this cake in half，and give one of the piece to your sister．But remembering to do it like a gentleman．""How do gentlemen do it"Dick asked．"They always give the bigger one piece to the other person，"answered his aunt．Dick thought out this for a few seconds．Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her，"Cut this cake in half，!Catherine．"

Answer 1

分析 文章講述了作者的朋友Dick的故事．有一天，母親帶他和妹妹去阿姨家玩．阿姨給了Dick一個漂亮的蛋糕，讓他分給妹妹吃．阿姨告訴Dick，紳士會把大的給別人．Dick想了一會后，他把蛋糕給了妹妹，讓妹妹平分．

解答 My friend Dick was seven years old，and her sister Katherine was five．One day their mother take them to their aunt's to play while she went to the city∧buy some new clothes．They played for a hour，and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen．She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said，"Dick，cut this cake in half，and give one of the piece to your sister．But remembering to do it like a gentleman．""How do gentlemen do it"Dick asked．"They always give the bigger one piece to the other person，"answered his aunt．Dick thought out this for a few seconds．Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her，"Cut this cake in half，!Catherine．"
詳解：
1．her改為his；邏輯指代錯誤．句意指代的是Dick，要用表示男性的his來指代．
2．take改為took；時態(tài)錯誤．句意表達的是過去發(fā)生的動作，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
3．加to；非謂語動詞錯誤．句中buy作目的狀語，要用動詞不定式來表示．
4．a改為an；冠詞錯誤．句中hour是以元音開頭的單詞，要用不定冠詞an來限定．
5．nicely改為nice；形容詞錯誤．句中nice修飾名詞cake，要用形容詞形式．
6．piece改為pieces；名詞錯誤．句中有one of修飾，表示其中之一，后面的名詞要用復數(shù)．
7．remembering改為remember；句型結構錯誤．句意表達的是命令，是一個祈使句，要用動詞原形．
8．one去掉；代詞錯誤．句中the bigger修飾piece，表示最大的一塊，one重復了．
9．out改為about；動詞搭配錯誤．句中think out是想出…；句意表達的是思考，要用think about．
10．but改為and；連詞錯誤．句意表達的是并列動作，不是轉折．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎知識．常考的知識點有：名詞（單復數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．