湯姆因在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)被學(xué)校處分，他感到很困惑，寫信給你求助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下結(jié)構(gòu)提示給湯姆回信。開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出。
Beginning: Your letter reached me yesterday. It said in your letter that……..
Paragraph 1: 手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：聯(lián)系便捷
Paragraph 2: 帶手機(jī)上學(xué)存在的問(wèn)題：干擾教學(xué)，有害學(xué)習(xí)和健康
Ending: It is right for school to prevent you from using cell phones in school.


Your letter reached me yesterday. It said in your letter that you were punished for using cell phones, which puzzled you.
There is no doubt that cell phones can bring us much convenience. We can keep in touch with friends and families wherever we are. Besides, the cell phone is a way to have fun.
However, there are some problems with using cell phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the class. It has been proved that using cell phones frequently does harm to health. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on cell phones and sending messages, which will result in bad results in study.
As a student, you should concentrate on study. It is right for school to prevent you from using cell phones.

解析試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)keep in touch with與。。保持聯(lián)系；does harm to對(duì)。。有害；spend time on sth在。�；ㄙM(fèi)時(shí)間；result in 導(dǎo)致；concentrate on 集中精力于；There is no doubt that cell phones can bring us much convenience.這個(gè)句子中不僅僅用到there is no doubt that毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)這個(gè)句型，還用到高級(jí)詞匯convenience；Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on cell phones and sending messages, which will result in bad results in study.這個(gè)句子中that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句，which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；It is right for school to prevent you from using cell phones這個(gè)句子中it做形式主語(yǔ)；
考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文

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