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15．現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人選擇微信閱讀的方式，你就這一現(xiàn)象在班上進(jìn)行了調(diào)查．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，客觀介紹調(diào)查的結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)微信閱讀的看法和建議．

70%的學(xué)生贊成	30%的學(xué)生反對(duì)	你的看法和建議
1、方便，隨時(shí)隨地可看； 2、內(nèi)容豐富、有趣，更新快．	1、過(guò)度依賴，浪費(fèi)時(shí)間； 2、信息良莠不齊，準(zhǔn)確性有待核實(shí)．	…（至少兩點(diǎn)）

注意：1、對(duì)照要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯．
2、字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Recently，we have conducted a survey about reading on WeChat in our class and the results are as follows．                                    

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人選擇微信閱讀的方式，你就這一現(xiàn)象在班上進(jìn)行了調(diào)查．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，客觀介紹調(diào)查的結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)微信閱讀的看法和建議，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從贊成和反對(duì)兩個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：in favor of支持；Besides另外；be informed of獲悉；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；As for至于，關(guān)于；make the best of 充分利用；
With the convenience the Internet and the smartphone bring to us，we can do reading whenever and wherever we like．（高分句型一）
Also，the information on WeChat is always updated so that we can be informed of what is happening．（高分句型二）
Firstly，some people may depend on WeChat and spend too much time on it，which is harmful，especially to students．（高分句型三）
Secondly，WeChat is full of all kinds of information，the accuracy of which is doubtful．（高分句型四）

解答 Recently，we have conducted a survey about reading on WeChat in our class and the results are as follows．
      About 70% of the students are in favor of reading on WeChat．With the convenience the Internet and the smartphone bring to us，we can do reading whenever and wherever we like．（高分句型一）Besides，there is such abundant information on WeChat that it can meet different needs．Also，the information on WeChat is always updated so that we can be informed of what is happening．（高分句型二）
      The other 30% take the"Against"side for the following reasons．Firstly，some people may depend on WeChat and spend too much time on it，which is harmful，especially to students．（高分句型三）Secondly，WeChat is full of all kinds of information，the accuracy of which is doubtful．（高分句型四）
      As for me，though the benefits of WeChat are beyond doubt，its negative effects should also be taken into account．We should make the best of it to keep us informed and broaden our horizons．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．