Question

請修改以下短文，短文共10處錯誤，每句最多有兩處錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen while the telephone rang. I went to answer it immediate. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I run back to the kitchen find the room full of smoke and the beef badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. To my surprise, two fire engine were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.

Answer 1

【小題1】while-when
【小題2】immediate-immediately
【小題3】She-It
【小題4】a-the
【小題5】run-ran
【小題6】find前加to
【小題7】opening-opened
【小題8】engine-engines
【小題9】about去掉
【小題10】which-that

解析【小題1】考查be doing …when…“正在干某事這時…”所以把while改成when。
【小題2】考查副詞，副詞修飾動詞went to answer，所以用immediately。
【小題3】考查代詞，電話中提到的人用代詞it，不用she或he。
【小題4】考查冠詞，“在電話中”用“on the phone”。
【小題5】考查時態(tài)，整篇文章用的是一般過去時態(tài)，所以把run改成ran。
【小題6】考查非謂語動詞，表示“結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)”用“to find”。
【小題7】考查時態(tài)，turn off，open和go out of是三個連續(xù)的動作，所以都用過去時態(tài)，把opening改成opened。
【小題8】考查名詞復數(shù)，前面有two，engine是可數(shù)名詞，所以用engines。門外停著兩輛消防車。
【小題9】考查介詞，tell sb sth“告訴某人某事”，tell后面不加介詞。
【小題10】考查強調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)“it is …that…”，所以把which改成that。正是我做飯粗心導致的濃煙。
考點：考查短文改錯