Question

14．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合生活中的事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文．
Everyone should learn how to give first aid，which is vital．Sometimes proper first aid can mean the difference between life and death．
注意：
①無(wú)需寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
④詞數(shù)為120左右．

Answer 1

分析 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
First aid is the king of medical care given to a victim of an accident or sudden sickness before any other help arrives．
急救是給予一個(gè)意外或突發(fā)疾病的受害者在他人到來(lái)之前活下來(lái)的醫(yī)療照護(hù)中的王者．
高分句型二：
 Faced with this situation，first of all，I asked Tom to sit down and made sure that he was bending forward slightly．
面對(duì)這種情況，首先，我讓湯姆坐下來(lái)，讓他微微向前彎腰．

解答 First aid is the king of medical care given to a victim of an accident or sudden sickness before any other help arrives（高分句型一）．I think that everybody should know how to give first aid，because it is very important in medical emergencies．
Last Sunday，Tom and I were playing basketball when his nose began to bleed．Faced with this situation，first of all，I asked Tom to sit down and made sure that he was bending forward slightly（高分句型二）．In the way，the blood ran out of his nose and didn't run down his throat．Then cautiously I squeezed his nose just below the bridge to stop the bleeding．
After a short time，the bleeding stopped．This experience shows that knowledge of first aid can make a difference．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫(xiě)作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．