Question

19．根據(jù)下面的漫畫，聯(lián)系生活實(shí)際，寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)作文．

Answer 1

分析 本書面表達(dá)是一篇圖畫類的寫作，要求考生展開關(guān)于懶惰和天分的討論．要仔細(xì)觀察分析圖畫的畫面，按照?qǐng)D意提示寫作．并且寫作時(shí)注意句子的銜接，適當(dāng)使用連詞．同時(shí)考生還要注意的是在寫作過(guò)程中所運(yùn)用的時(shí)態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．除此以外，要注意寫作過(guò)程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語(yǔ)和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語(yǔ)：
have a strong desire to do 渴望做某事，end in…以..告終，play a very important role in…在..中起到很重要的作用，
高分句子：
1．However，regretfully，he is firmly fastened to his original position by the nature of laziness and certainly achieves nothing．本句中副詞 regretfully做插入語(yǔ)的使用，豐富了句子結(jié)構(gòu)．
2．Only by working hard and practicing a lot are we able to overcome difficulties and achieve our goals．only位于句首，主句進(jìn)行倒裝，本句是亮點(diǎn)句型．

解答 In the cartoon，the man enjoys being clever and wishes to do a great job．However，regretfully，he is firmly fastened to his original position by the nature of laziness and certainly achieves nothing（描述畫面）．
  In fact，you can see many such examples in life．Just as the old saying goes，diligence leads to success while laziness results in failure（引用諺語(yǔ)）．Every task requires hard work，from learning English to building a house．Some of my classmates are definitely clever，and they have a strong desire to go to a famous university，but unfortunately，they are wasting time talking or playing．And consequently，they end in failure（舉例說(shuō)明）．
  Therefore，in my opinion，diligence plays a very important role in life．Only by working hard and practicing a lot are we able to overcome difficulties and achieve our goals（高分句子）．No one can succeed just by thinking without any actions（發(fā)表自己看法總結(jié)全文）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 半開放性作文留給考生發(fā)揮的空間比較大．一般只提供一個(gè)話題或一個(gè)圖片，要求考生合理地進(jìn)行想象．考生在寫作時(shí)，需要做到以下幾點(diǎn)：第一、認(rèn)真審題，把握所有信息．第二、確定體裁，把握行文格式．第三、羅列提綱，思考表達(dá)方式．第四、組織語(yǔ)言，展開寫作． 寫作時(shí)，運(yùn)用熟悉的英語(yǔ)詞匯、句型等；要盡量運(yùn)用多樣化的句式，注意長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)合；要注意上下文的銜接，過(guò)渡要自然．第五、認(rèn)真檢查，查漏補(bǔ)缺．