Question

假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。

修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Jack,

I am pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working part-time in a fast-food restaurant. Now I would like to share your working experience with you during the past summer.

In the beginning of the summer vacation, I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket. I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met . Sometimes I was laughed at, and most of the time, I was praised for my wonderful works by many people. Half a month passed quickly after I knew it, and I learned how to deal with different people.

Above all, I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

1.第一句：pleasing改成pleased

2.第一句：greatly改成great

3.第二句：your改成my

4.第三句：In改成At

5.第三句：as和shopping之間加a

6.第四句：去掉have

7.第五句：and改成but

8.第五句：works 改成work

9.第六句：after 改成before

10.第七句：solve改成solving

【解析】

試題分析：

1.pleasing改成pleased. 固定結(jié)構(gòu)Be pleased to do sth.開心地做某事。故將pleasing改成pleased.

2.greatly改成great. 分析語境a great time：一段精彩的時光。Greatly為副詞，此處應(yīng)該用形容詞詞性，故將greatly改成great.

3.your改成my. 分析語境Now I would like to share your working experience with you during the past summer. 我將和你分享我的暑期工作經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)句意可知應(yīng)為“我的工作經(jīng)歷”，故將your改成my.

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5.as和shopping之間加a. 分析語境I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket我被一家超市雇為一名導(dǎo)購。A shopping guide：一名導(dǎo)購。名詞前應(yīng)有冠詞修飾，此處不是特指，所以用a表示泛指。故在as和shopping之間加a.

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7.and改成but. 根據(jù)原文 Sometimes I was laughed at和I was praised for my wonderful works by many people有時候我會被嘲笑，大多數(shù)情況下，許多人因我出色的工作表現(xiàn)而夸獎我�？芍�，前后文之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將and改成but.

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