假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)詞下劃一橫線（__）, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. What is more, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Only in this way can you be good teacher and win respect from them. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream come true.

 

1.in→on

2.give→ giving

3.but →and

4.was→ am

5.there→ it

6.knowledges →knowledge

7.good →well

8.him →them

9.good→ 前加a

10.去掉but

【解析】

試題分析：在本文中作者講述了自己的夢想是成為一名老師。他夢想著能夠站在講臺(tái)上，給可愛的孩子們上課，課下和孩子們一起玩。他認(rèn)為當(dāng)老師不容易，除了知識(shí)外，還要和學(xué)生們交朋友，去照顧他們，尊重他們。

1. 考查介詞。I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom .在講臺(tái)上應(yīng)該用介詞on。

2. giving 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls.此處and連接standing和give，做介詞of的賓語，故把give改為giving，。

3. →and 考查連詞。I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.從句意可知前后句是承接關(guān)系，把but改為and。

4. am 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。I am always young when I was staying with them. 從語境判斷作者指和學(xué)生們在一起的時(shí)候 會(huì)感到年輕，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，把was改為am。

5. it 考查介詞。I know there is not easy to be a teacher. 此處是to be a teacher做主語，用形式主語it代替，把there改為it。

6. →knowledge Without enough knowledges. Knowledge是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把knowledges改為knowledge。

7. →well 考查副詞。, you can never teach good.. 修飾動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用副詞，把good改為well。

8. →them 考查代詞。you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. 從前句內(nèi)容可知要和學(xué)生們交朋友，所以把him改為them。

9. 前加a 考查冠詞。Only in this way can you be good teacher. Teacher是單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞，此處指一名教師，是泛指概念，所以前面加a。

10. 考查連詞。Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream come true. 連詞though不和but同時(shí)在一個(gè)句子中出現(xiàn)，故去掉but。

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