Question

12．假如你叫李華，是一名高一學生．自從進入高中以后，你發(fā)現(xiàn)很多同學晚上學習到很晚，他們邊學習邊吃零食或喝可樂，早上則由于起床太晚而不吃早餐，你感覺這樣會對身體有害．請你根據(jù)這種現(xiàn)象，給《英語周報》寫一封信反應上述情況，并談談自己的看法．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120詞；
2．可根據(jù)實際需要，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）
Dear Editor，
   I'm a high school student who has just entered Grade One．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
 I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
 Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
They often stay up late into night，eating snacks or drinking Coca-cola to keep them awake，which，of course，is bad for their health．
他們經常熬夜到深夜，吃零食或喝可口可樂來保持清醒，這當然對他們的健康有害．
高分句型二：
 Faced with such great pressure from study，not only should we try to keep a healthy diet，but we should also get as much rest as possible．
面對如此巨大的學習壓力，我們不僅應該保持健康的飲食習慣，而且我們也應該盡可能的多休息．

解答 Dear Editor，
   I'm a high school student who has just entered Grade One．Since I entered Grade One，I have found that some students in my class study harder than before．They often stay up late into night，eating snacks or drinking Coca-cola to keep them awake，which，of course，is bad for their health（高分句型一）．Owing to staying up too late the night before，some students find it difficult to get up early the next morning，so they have to go to class without breakfast，which is also a bad habit and does great harm to their health．
   In my point of view，important as studies are，health should also be taken seriously．Faced with such great pressure from study，not only should we try to keep a healthy diet，but we should also get as much rest as possible（高分句型二）．Only in this way can we keep fit and study well．
   I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．