Question

假如你是李華，你和你的美國(guó)筆友David約好這個(gè)寒假你將去美國(guó)看望他，并給他帶一些具有中國(guó)特色的物產(chǎn)，比如剪紙，京劇臉譜等。但是，你的表哥將在這個(gè)春節(jié)結(jié)婚，并且你還將代表學(xué)校去北京參加一個(gè)很重要的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。因此，你將無(wú)法去美國(guó)。請(qǐng)寫一封信給David說(shuō)明情況，致歉，并提出彌補(bǔ)措施。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。
詞數(shù)：100~120詞。
參考詞匯：剪紙：paper-cutting   京劇臉譜：Beijing Opera Facial Mask
Dear David,
I’m writing the letter to apologize _____________________________________________
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear David,
I’m writing the letter to apologize that I can’t go to America to see you this winter holiday. I promised to visit you and bring you some traditional things of China such as paper-cutting and Beijing Opera Facial Masks. But I’m afraid I can’t keep my word. One reason is that my cousin’s wedding is planned for this Spring Festival. Of course, I can’t miss it. Another reason is that there will be an important English speech contest. I will participate in it on behalf of my school. I have to prepare for it.
To express my sincere apology, I will send the paper-cutting and Beijing Opera Facial Masks to you by airmail. And if you are free, nothing will be better if you can come to China to attend a traditional wedding. I’m sure you won’t be disappointed.
I do hope you can forgive me.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是書信類作文，你的美國(guó)朋友David邀請(qǐng)你去美國(guó)，但是你因故不能去，要求寫一封信給David說(shuō)明情況，致歉，并提出彌補(bǔ)措施。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子： I promised to答應(yīng)做…keep one’s word信守諾言. participate in 參加，prepare for為…做準(zhǔn)備，on behalf of代表， One reason is that my cousin’s wedding is planned for this Spring Festival. Another reason is that there will be an important English speech contest. 這兩句話用了表語(yǔ)從句， To express my sincere apology, I will send the paper-cutting and Beijing Opera Facial Masks to you by airmail. 這句話用了不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)， I do hope you can forgive me.這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)。